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Post by desirecampbell » Thu Mar 13, 2008 10:57 am

finnishjuoppo wrote:In ssj5 mini we see Broly, is he going to help Gohan and the others?
if so, it will be really great!
I like Broli too, I really do, but there's no goddamn reason he should be alive. He was suppossed to have died at the end of movie 8, but just got frozen (??!?) then he was launched into the sun. Then he can back as a clone-thing (haven't watched that in English, so all I know is Trunks pees on him), which melts or something.

He's dead. Thrice dead. Let him be dead.

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Post by testing223 » Fri Mar 14, 2008 1:21 am

Yeah, bringing back OLD foes is not the way to go. If you're gonna fanfic out, at least bring new threats. Like, say, Broli's son or Dabura's mate or something new.

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Post by Snail » Fri Mar 14, 2008 2:07 am

Broly's son? That's highly unlikely. That guy is just obsessed with killing, I just can't see that happening. He'd probably have his desire with the female, and then toss her aside and crush her with a mountain or something.

On a side note; I wish we would have gotten to see the calmer state Broly more. He seems like a really tragic villain; he's essentially just a being with that whole split-personality thing. I poo on those who say Broly is nothing but a one-dimensional character. *continues to rant. lol.

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Post by caejones » Fri Mar 14, 2008 3:06 am

testing223 wrote:Yeah, bringing back OLD foes is not the way to go. If you're gonna fanfic out, at least bring new threats. Like, say, Broli's son or Dabura's mate or something new.
Why not both?
... In spite of that, I still agree that Broli should just die.
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Post by Captain Awesome » Fri Mar 14, 2008 3:07 am

Snail wrote: I wish we would have gotten to see the calmer state Broly more. He seems like a really tragic villain; he's essentially just a being with that whole split-personality thing. I poo on those who say Broly is nothing but a one-dimensional character. *continues to rant. lol.
But the way Broly is depicted, he is a one-dimensional character, if we had spent more time with him before his psychotic break, you would have an argument.

I mean even before then, in the flashbacks he's still just a psychotic killer.
desirecampbell wrote:I like Broli too, I really do, but there's no goddamn reason he should be alive. He was suppossed to have died at the end of movie 8, but just got frozen (??!?) then he was launched into the sun. Then he can back as a clone-thing (haven't watched that in English, so all I know is Trunks pees on him), which melts or something.

He's dead. Thrice dead. Let him be dead.
I couldn't agree more, Broli coming back would be a huge mistake on Toyble's part, there is no way he could justify it, or make it convincing.

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Post by The Time Traveller » Fri Mar 14, 2008 5:47 am

What if there was a "Clone Saga"? A clone of Broli and Tullece could appear.

Big, strong and menacing like Broli, Smart and Maniacal like Tullece, and he may not be a Legendary Super Saiyajin, he could be an artificial one.

What would be be called? Brollece?
Sounds mad.

Hell, I'm gonna design him, I think it sounds awesome. Maybe get two more combined clones, Piccolo Daimao and Lord Slug (Piccolug?), and Koola and Freeza (Koleeza?:lol:)

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Post by peterx » Fri Mar 14, 2008 7:53 am

Well I think the Brolly "problem" comes from here:

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"Episode 9: Trunks, Don't Be A Fool!
Narrator: Last time on Dragon Ball AF, Gogeta gave it his all fighting Xicor, but it was no use. And once Gogeta de-fused, all hope seemed lost.
All the Saiyans get ready to attack. Then Goten and chibi Trunks go Super Saiyan 4 and preform the fusion dance.
Goten and Chibi Trunks: FU.....SION...HA!!!!
The two fuse into Gotenks, who then powers up into a Super Saiyan 4.
Gotenks: Now you're mine!
Gotenks charges at Xicor and goes to punch him. Xicor jumps out of the way, making Gotenks' punch hit the floor of the look-out. Gotenks then jumps up and fallows Xicor into the sky. Xicor stops and clutches Gotenks down to the ground as hard as he can. Gotenks hit the ground of the look-out and de-fuses. Goten and chibi Trunks skid across the floor.
Videl: Woah!
Future Trunks: I have a plan, and if it fails i have a back up plan.
Future Trunks zilches behind Xicor and pins him to the ground. Xicor kicks Future Trunks off of himself. Xicor kips-up and Future Trunks charges again. Xicor does a round-house kick on Future Trunks and sends him rolling across the floor. He stops rolling when he gets beside the dragon balls. Future Trunks struggles to his feet.
Future Trunks: I won't try that again. Well, time for my trump card.
Future Trunks pulls out his sword and charges at Xicor. Future Trunks starts slashing Xicor into pieces. Xicor heals himself and punches Future Trunks back down by the dragon balls.
Vegeta: Trunks, don't be a fool!
Future Trunks: Shenron, I call upon thee!!
the dragon balls begin to glow and Shenron emerges from them.
Shenron: What is your wish?
Future Trunks: I wish for Broly to be brought back to life to this plane as a pure hearted person! And that will be all.
Shenron's eyes glow red.
Shenron: Your wish has been granted!!
Shenron disappears into the dragon balls as the balls fly up into the air and disappear around the Earth.
Xicor: RRR!! You wasted my wish, you little brat!
Xicor is charging towards Future Trunks when Broly appears and kicks Xicor to the jungle below.
Broly: How did i get here?
Future Trunks: I wished you back with the dragon balls.
Broly: Why?
Goku: We need your help.
Broly: Well Kakarot, you're lucky I'm in a good mood.
Xicor flies up back on the look-out.
Xicor: Which one of you brats hit me?
Broly: Who are you calling a brat?
Broly charges at Xicor and upper cuts him, sending him into the sky.
Xicor: (thinking) Where'd they get such a strong fighter?
Broly: Wow, another Saiyan survived.
Broly flies up to Xicor and clutches him far down into the Earth, making a crater. Broly floats down to the look-out floor.
Goku: I didn't think there were any other forms after stage 4.
Broly: You'd be suprised.
Dende heals chibi Trunks, Goten and Piccolo.
Narrator: Did Broly do it? Could Xicor actually be finished? Or will the Z Warriors be in for more suprises? Find out on the next action packed episode of Dragon Ball AF!!"

Source: http://new.dragonballaf.googlepages.com/home

I think this is the fanfic what Toyble's idea based on (but with many advantageous change!) !

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Post by finnishjuoppo » Fri Mar 14, 2008 1:56 pm

Maybe Broly is brought back to life like Vegeta in Majin saga?
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Post by SSj Gogito » Fri Mar 14, 2008 8:07 pm

Well Broly been back to life dosen't seem like a good idea, Toyble may have found a good way to bring him back. Hopefully
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Post by Remix » Fri Mar 14, 2008 11:30 pm

Other than Cooler, I really don't like the idea of having movie chartacters in there. Cooler is perfectly fine as long as the author doesn't use the movies as a backstory.

The movies and the main story do NOT mix. That's why I don't even consider the Garlic Jr. Saga as canon. I just see it as Dead Zone 2.
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Post by Kaboom » Fri Mar 14, 2008 11:58 pm

EDIT:

WTF, wrong thread. I was wondering why I couldn't find this post in the other one. >_>
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Post by finnishjuoppo » Sun Mar 16, 2008 3:59 am

I hope that Tapion and Minosha are going to fight with evil kaioshin or Xicor. That would be awsome!
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Post by jjgp1112 » Sun Mar 16, 2008 8:03 am

Remix wrote:Other than Cooler, I really don't like the idea of having movie chartacters in there. Cooler is perfectly fine as long as the author doesn't use the movies as a backstory.

The movies and the main story do NOT mix. That's why I don't even consider the Garlic Jr. Saga as canon. I just see it as Dead Zone 2.
Well, technically, Cooler's Revenge, Bojack Unbound, and Wrath Of The Dragon could all fit into canon.
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Post by eienmic » Sun Mar 16, 2008 8:52 am

Could but they don't. All movies possess a flaw or flaws, that somehow pushes them out of the main story's time line. Didn't there use to be a thread about this somewhere? I swear I remember reading it...
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Post by Remix » Sun Mar 16, 2008 12:26 pm

jjgp1112 wrote:Well, technically, Cooler's Revenge, Bojack Unbound, and Wrath Of The Dragon could all fit into canon.
What?!

Oh, boy. Explain.
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Post by caejones » Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:57 am

Yeah, there's a movie continuity thread (or five) somewhere.
Generally, the discrepencies with movies 5 and 9 depend on how much people consider contradictory (I.E, details like Trunks' hair, Gohan's tail and Goku's choice of techniques, which don't _have_ to be contradictions for many...).
Umm... I have no idea where the threads went. I thought at least ne was stickied somewhere?
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Post by Remix » Tue Mar 18, 2008 9:21 am

Well, it looks like Dragonball AF is getting some love on the main page and has become the topic of discussion on the new podcast!
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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Tue Mar 18, 2008 11:37 am

Did anyone ever translate these (http://blog.livedoor.jp/toyble/archives/50795179.html) pages of the SSJ5 Transformation? Just want to make sure because I don't want to do any EPIC backtracking.

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Post by desirecampbell » Tue Mar 18, 2008 11:39 am

Tatsunoboshi Horoko wrote:Did anyone ever translate these (http://blog.livedoor.jp/toyble/archives/50795179.html) pages of the SSJ5 Transformation? Just want to make sure because I don't want to do any EPIC backtracking.
Yes, I think it was Herms.

http://desirecampbell.com/projects/dbaf ... ssj5_1.jpg
http://desirecampbell.com/projects/dbaf ... ssj5_2.jpg
http://desirecampbell.com/projects/dbaf ... ssj5_3.jpg

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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Tue Mar 18, 2008 11:52 am

Ah, cool. Thanks.

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