DB Continued chapter 2 (complete)

Chaos Saiyajin · Post by **Chaos Saiyajin** » Tue Jan 17, 2006 10:33 pm

Haha! Chaos may never know

Damn you, desire!

Just kidding, I forgot to mention how I loved your coloring job on the first one...

Metrite · Post by **Metrite** » Wed Jan 18, 2006 3:05 am

desirecampbell wrote:That picture is sick - did you draw that?

I got that pic from a friend(not sure if he made it himself or not). I added it to a small collection of better DBZ art(as in pictures that do match DB's style almost perfectly) I have(nice job coloring it(I wonder if the pants would look better grayish like that, or white like usual?)). It was what he came up with from a discussion we had about how if Trunks from the future ever learned the fusion, he could meet the perfect person to do it with, himself(just plan it out, wait ten minutes and if another Trunks in a time machine doesn't appear then that's his sign to go back in the past of his currect timeline(making yet another timeline based off it!)) by about five minutes and meet himself who was expecting this to happen). A good look for his hair was probably the only hard part to imagine, the rest is just Trunks in a fusion suit(though it's not the same as usual, certain traits of his usual cloths like the shoes are still there... I guess if two people wearing the exact same thing used the fusion that might be possible, what matters is that it looks cool

) who picks up both the swords his unfused selves had with them. If present Trunks happened to wear something similar and have a sword like Future Trunks then him fusing with Future Trunks would pretty much be the same thing.

kindertuin · Post by **kindertuin** » Wed Jan 18, 2006 7:45 am

Hey Bejiita, love the comic, but you made a mistake! When Songoku hits Vegeta, he hits him on the left chiek (is it spelled that way?), but he has scarfs on the right side. Just telling you, mayby you did something wrong when scanning the page?

If someone already told you this, then i am sorry to point this out again, but i don't have the time to read all the previous pages!

Post by **desirecampbell** » Wed Jan 18, 2006 10:05 am

Metrite wrote:
desirecampbell wrote:That picture is sick - did you draw that?
I got that pic from a friend(not sure if he made it himself or not). I added it to a small collection of better DBZ art(as in pictures that do match DB's style almost perfectly) I have(nice job coloring it(I wonder if the pants would look better grayish like that, or white like usual?)). It was what he came up with from a discussion we had about how if Trunks from the future ever learned the fusion, he could meet the perfect person to do it with, himself(just plan it out, wait ten minutes and if another Trunks in a time machine doesn't appear then that's his sign to go back in the past of his currect timeline(making yet another timeline based off it!)) by about five minutes and meet himself who was expecting this to happen). A good look for his hair was probably the only hard part to imagine, the rest is just Trunks in a fusion suit(though it's not the same as usual, certain traits of his usual cloths like the shoes are still there... I guess if two people wearing the exact same thing used the fusion that might be possible, what matters is that it looks cool ) who picks up both the swords his unfused selves had with them. If present Trunks happened to wear something similar and have a sword like Future Trunks then him fusing with Future Trunks would pretty much be the same thing.

"White pants", eh?

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/4517/t ... 31b8ru.jpg

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3650/t ... 32b4qu.jpg

Bejiita · Post by **Bejiita** » Wed Jan 18, 2006 10:41 am

kindertuin wrote:Hey Bejiita, love the comic, but you made a mistake! When Songoku hits Vegeta, he hits him on the left chiek (is it spelled that way?), but he has scarfs on the right side. Just telling you, mayby you did something wrong when scanning the page?

If someone already told you this, then i am sorry to point this out again, but i don't have the time to read all the previous pages!

Hey, you know, you are right. Nothing to do with the scanner, just me being dumb.

I'll have to change all that now...crap...

Oh, and you did spell cheek wrong.

kindertuin · Post by **kindertuin** » Wed Jan 18, 2006 12:33 pm

Hey, you know, you are right. Nothing to do with the scanner, just me being dumb. I'll have to change all that now...crap...
Oh, and you did spell cheek wrong.

These things happen, i wouldn't bother to change it, becuase you could mess up the drawing.
Oh and one more question, when they all leave, you see 5 of them flying away, but when they are training, Trunks isn't there. Where did he go?

And do you really think Vegeta would train with Songoku? I believe he wouldn't, but then again, at the end of DBZ, he has changed a lot!

Bejiita · Post by **Bejiita** » Wed Jan 18, 2006 12:53 pm

Vegeta isn't as bad as at the end of Z, he was a lot more calm, he still doesn't socialise with the group as much, even though those episodes were filler, Toei were giving the impression Vegeta had made a change for the better.

And Trunks is there, he is actually on the ground, I'll put him in it soon.

I have already changed the Vegeta thing...oh well, what's done is done.

Edit: I have added pages 12 and 13, one more page of chapter 2 left then it's on to the next.

Also, I have added another 4 pages of that Simpson Parody, even I'm giving my brother ratings for that, I think it's well good.

t-bone135 · Post by **t-bone135** » Fri Jan 20, 2006 12:17 am

Unfortunately the bottom page of your manga won't show up. I don't know why either. My guess is that the whole page in general is finally too big for my computer to handle now.

Oh well, that Simpson's parody is really good. It shows up fine.

Post by **desirecampbell** » Fri Jan 20, 2006 12:26 am

"Are you okay father?" Is he asking for a beat down?

Bejiita · Post by **Bejiita** » Fri Jan 20, 2006 11:16 am

t-bone135 wrote:Unfortunately the bottom page of your manga won't show up. I don't know why either. My guess is that the whole page in general is finally too big for my computer to handle now.

Oh well, that Simpson's parody is really good. It shows up fine.

I don't think it's the page being too big, or maybe it is, some of the pages won't show for me either...but if you refresh it might show up.

It seems it works for desirecampbell.

t-bone135 · Post by **t-bone135** » Fri Jan 20, 2006 4:50 pm

Ah, I think I got it now. It ends with Vegeta going Super Saiyajin and Goten and Goku looking on right?

Bejiita · Post by **Bejiita** » Sat Jan 21, 2006 4:56 pm

t-bone135 wrote:Ah, I think I got it now. It ends with Vegeta going Super Saiyajin and Goten and Goku looking on right?

Yea that's it, but Goten isn't looking on, he's supposed to be getting punched in the belly by Uub, maybe it's a bit hard to make out...

t-bone135 · Post by **t-bone135** » Sat Jan 21, 2006 5:34 pm

Bejiita wrote:Yea that's it, but Goten isn't looking on, he's supposed to be getting punched in the belly by Uub, maybe it's a bit hard to make out...

No, I just couldn't see it probably. It seemed like the bottom portion was cut a little but I could just barely make out the last panels, (or at the time, what I thought to be the last panels.) If Uub was at the very bottom of it chances are that's what happened.

... I tried ...

Holken · Post by **Holken** » Sat Jan 21, 2006 6:11 pm

Lol, I find this box very funny ^^

Bejiita · Post by **Bejiita** » Sat Jan 21, 2006 6:49 pm

Holken wrote: Lol, I find this box very funny ^^

It was intended to be.

That PC text looks way better, the things I should do...

And t-bone135, Uub isn't actually drawn in the last panel, just he's hand where it's punching Goten, you can make out the black wrist band, it is quite unlclear, maybe it does need a re draw...when I have time.

Post by **desirecampbell** » Sat Jan 21, 2006 7:49 pm

Bejiita wrote:
Holken wrote:[img]http://img491.imageshack.us/img491/9043/case4dz.jpg[img]

Lol, I find this box very funny ^^
It was intended to be.

That PC text looks way better, the things I should do...

And t-bone135, Uub isn't actually drawn in the last panel, just he's hand where it's punching Goten, you can make out the black wrist band, it is quite unlclear, maybe it does need a re draw...when I have time.

I was actually thinking of suggesting using a computer to put the text on, it'd allow you to make smaller word balloons and spellcheck

That, and adjusting the brightness/contrast to give the image more definition, like this...

http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/5641/dbcredux2tf.jpg

I think I got carried away...

Bejiita · Post by **Bejiita** » Sat Jan 21, 2006 9:35 pm

desirecampbell wrote:
Bejiita wrote:
Holken wrote:[img]http://img491.imageshack.us/img491/9043/case4dz.jpg[img]

Lol, I find this box very funny ^^
It was intended to be.

That PC text looks way better, the things I should do...

And t-bone135, Uub isn't actually drawn in the last panel, just he's hand where it's punching Goten, you can make out the black wrist band, it is quite unlclear, maybe it does need a re draw...when I have time.
I was actually thinking of suggesting using a computer to put the text on, it'd allow you to make smaller word balloons and spellcheck

That, and adjusting the brightness/contrast to give the image more definition, like this...

http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/5641/dbcredux2tf.jpg

I think I got carried away...

Hey, that actually looks very good. Part of my job should be to neat it up on the PC, but I barely use any programs apart from Paint to edit it, like removing smudges, or errors the eraser left marks with. Plus seeing it with text looks more proffessional, after I've done chapter 2 expect me to fix it up.

Chaos Saiyajin · Post by **Chaos Saiyajin** » Sun Jan 22, 2006 12:15 am

Sweet update, Bejita! I don't know what I like more, the Simpsons parody or DBC...

You know hat someone needs to do? Family Guy parody.

Bejiita · Post by **Bejiita** » Wed Jan 25, 2006 6:24 pm

Chaos Saiyajin wrote: Sweet update, Bejita! I don't know what I like more, the Simpsons parody or DBC... You know hat someone needs to do? Family Guy parody.

I don't think much of Family Guy. The Simpsons is better for me.

Now my younger brother's work is challenging mine?! Heh, as it goes it's way easier for him to copy from the manga, just changing the bodies, but I think the Simpson Parody is going along nicely, my bro just made edits to every page and made them look much better, like what desirecampbell did to a page of mine.

There is 4 more pages for the Simpsons thing, but pages are on hold for DBC...I've been working the past few days.

I'll update soon.

Later.

kindertuin · Post by **kindertuin** » Mon Jan 30, 2006 7:34 am

Mayby time to post something (this topic is sliding away).
Euh... nice drawings and wanting for the final page on this one.