Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:56 am

Herms wrote:So basically we've got the Xicor Games to look forward to here.

"Ah, perfect. An perfect chance to test my Perfect Whiskers!!"

Mezase Xicor, the single. Coming to a store near you this Christmas!!

Post by **desirecampbell** » Mon Oct 12, 2009 9:35 am

goku the krump dancer wrote:Does Toyble have a pattern as to when he releases new pages? I've been following this AF since late last year.

Usually once a month, but less lately.

Innagadadavida wrote:We need to change the title of this thread to something like (AF - UPDATED WHENEVER) so that people don't have to ask this all the time.

Done.

JulieYBM wrote:*Hits desire over the head with sack o' potatos!*
Typeset, mein typesetter, vomedos!

Aaah! I'm on it.

Scarz · Post by **Scarz** » Mon Oct 12, 2009 10:13 am

Herms wrote:Well, most of this update was the same as the rough-drafts, but a few extra pages, but there was an extra line or two added to the old pages as well.

[...]

4
Gohan: [r] Cracks…!!! [l] In…in the Z Sword
Vegeta: Cracks!? What’s going on!?
Voice: He~ey, Son Gohan
Gohan: [r] Th…that voice [l] Kaioshin’s ancestor?
Elder Kaioshin: [t] That’s right…[l] Seems that seal failed somehow…

Bull...

5
Gohan: Wh-What?!!!
Vegeta: A failure!!?
Elder Kaioshin: [r] That seal will last another month…[l] When it breaks, that guy will come out again.

Fucking...

Vegeta: What did you say?!
Gohan: Th…that can’t be…
Gohan: Wh…what should we do?
Elder Kaioshin: We~ell, asking that won’t really help…
Gohan: [r] Is there nothing [l] We can do…?
Vegeta: [r] So you’re saying that in one month…[l] We have to surpass him?...

SHIT!

7
Kaioshin: Well, there really isn’t anywhere else for me to go…
EK: [r] Hmph [l] And you tried to make yourself look so cool…
Vegeta: [r] First off, just who was that bastard? [l] Weren’t you two Kakarrot’s only sons?
Gohan: [r] I don’t really know myself. [l] Only, a long time ago father told me this story…

AAAAAAGGGGHHHH!!!! No Gohan don't even go there! Don't you even fucking start! As soon as this Xicor fight was finally over I gave DBAF the benefit of the doubt. The comic started with 100+ pages of nothing but mismatched fight scenes and now the story will move on to more pointless fight scenes! I'm not excepting Shakespearean play here I just want something interesting to happen. Okay, I shouldn't get upset over a free online fancomic but I'm a fangirl. It's expected of someone like me.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Mon Oct 12, 2009 11:32 am

Uh...it's moving into a flashback right now. The plot's playing out, let's give it a chance to do something.

Hellspawn28 · Post by **Hellspawn28** » Mon Oct 12, 2009 12:29 pm

Gohan: [r] I don’t really know myself. [l] Only, a long time ago father told me this story…

This sounds awesome and I hope to see more of this

.

Post by **Herms** » Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:22 pm

Scarz wrote:AAAAAAGGGGHHHH!!!! No Gohan don't even go there! Don't you even fucking start! As soon as this Xicor fight was finally over I gave DBAF the benefit of the doubt. The comic started with 100+ pages of nothing but mismatched fight scenes and now the story will move on to more pointless fight scenes! I'm not excepting Shakespearean play here I just want something interesting to happen. Okay, I shouldn't get upset over a free online fancomic but I'm a fangirl. It's expected of someone like me.

Well, I'm not too sure how I feel about this whole "Xicor Games" plot twist myself, but at the very least it looks there will be a break from the fighting for a while anyway, as everyone trains and whatnot. Considering Toyble's sporadic updating schedule, it may be quite a long time before the fighting starts up again.

Hellspawn28 · Post by **Hellspawn28** » Tue Oct 13, 2009 1:26 am

He makes like a new page like one month or so. It will be around 2010 once we see SSj5.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Tue Oct 13, 2009 1:39 am

A page a month? Not exactly. When he's got the time he seems to be able to throw out 3-6 a month.

Hellspawn28 · Post by **Hellspawn28** » Tue Oct 13, 2009 1:43 am

It seems so long when he updates them, so it feels like a month time to me. Since we saw Broly in the SSj5 preview, then I wounder if he will return in the next page.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Tue Oct 13, 2009 1:45 am

Well, it typically is a month between updates. For a while he was doing updates in the first few days of the month.

Hellspawn28 · Post by **Hellspawn28** » Tue Oct 13, 2009 2:57 am

I hope Broly as a SSj5 are just promotional artwork for the comic not happeing in the series. SSj3 Broly is bad enough.

Post by **Herms** » Tue Oct 13, 2009 3:24 pm

I hope they are too, though I could see them releasing Broli from Hell to help them fight Xicor.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Tue Oct 13, 2009 3:28 pm

I don't think Broli will become a 'Super Saiyan 5' within the story.

I am, however, interested in seeing how this sneak preview comes to pass, if at all.

goku the krump dancer · Post by **goku the krump dancer** » Tue Oct 13, 2009 7:23 pm

Herms wrote:I hope they are too, though I could see them releasing Broli from Hell to help them fight Xicor.

That makes perfect sence even though that would mean he got over his blinding rage towards kakarotto.

If anything Xicor would be a good what-if/exclusive character imo.

MCDaveG · Post by **MCDaveG** » Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:38 am

I don't get the story much...... Please, explain it to me someone.... Who is that evil Goku with crystals on mouth?

Post by **Herms** » Wed Oct 14, 2009 12:01 pm

He's Xicor, the son of Goku and the West Kaioshin. It turns out that West Kaioshin actually survived her fight with Boo, but was stuck floating through space in pain for a long time. This seems to have driven her mad, and she became obsessed with creating the ultimate power to rule the universe with, so that that sort of thing wouldn't happen again. Freeza was an earlier offspring of hers, but when he was defeated by Goku, she figured that he would make a better father for the ultimate lifeform. It's still not really clear how or when Xicor was concieved, but apparently Gohan is about to tell the story about that he heard from Goku. Toyble started the fan comic before Toriyama revealed that the Kaioshin are members of an asexual race whose new members grow on trees, so it's not clear how or if he'll address this inconsistency with his premise of a Kaioshin having children. Xicor himself and his origin are based off of AF fan rumors that said the villian of AF would be a son of Goku and some goddess. His name may come from a son Luke Skywalker has in the Star Wars expanded universe.

SSJ Helldog · Post by **SSJ Helldog** » Wed Oct 14, 2009 12:41 pm

How do you guys pronounce Xicor anyway? I'm sure we've been over this before, but hell if I can find it. I say "Zee-core."

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Wed Oct 14, 2009 12:51 pm

SSJ Helldog wrote:How do you guys pronounce Xicor anyway? I'm sure we've been over this before, but hell if I can find it. I say "Zee-core."

'Zai cor' is usually how I pronounce it.

MCDaveG · Post by **MCDaveG** » Wed Oct 14, 2009 1:17 pm

Herms wrote:He's Xicor, the son of Goku and the West Kaioshin.

When I saw it, I was like: Daaaamn, awesome art. But now I'm starting to read this, that's maybe the worst fanfiction I heard in my opinion....
I don't like that Freeza off-spring thing and Goku and kaioshin's kid.....

I have my own ideas on dojinshi comic, but there is not that much time on draw that thing and nowadays I don't even have the mood for it....

There was character Xizor in Star Wars. Member of reptiloid race and prince also leader of crime organization Black Sun....

Skywalker has only one son in expanded universe, Ben Skywalker.....

Little SW geekness

Innagadadavida · Post by **Innagadadavida** » Wed Oct 14, 2009 1:57 pm

SSJ Helldog wrote:How do you guys pronounce Xicor anyway? I'm sure we've been over this before, but hell if I can find it. I say "Zee-core."

I pronounce it "Zicksore." Although now that I think about it, that's totally wrong.

Oh well, I also pronounce Saiyan wrong so who cares?