Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Sun Dec 14, 2008 4:39 pm

2008夏コミケで、発売しました「2巻最終回ver.」に載せた短編最終回を今回、
「３巻最終回ver.」として出展することにいたしました！
ってことで、今回の詳細を改めてまとめます。

日　時　2008年12月29日(月)

時　間　10：00～16：00

場　所　東京ビッグサイト

ブース　東地区O　ブロック15b

出展誌

DBAF①【改訂版第2刷】全66ページ　￥1,000　

（blogで公開中のpage1～page64まで）

DBAF②【改訂版第1刷】全66ページ　￥1,000　　

（blogで公開中のpage65～page119＋公開予定のpage120～page127)

DBAF③最終回ver.【第1刷】全36ページ　￥700

（blogで公開予定のpage128～page131＋blog未公開の短編最終回21ページ＋イラスト集6ページ）

※前回出展誌との違い

DBAF①→ほぼ変わりなし（一部修正箇所アリ）

DABF②→短編最終回が無くなり、そのぶん本編を収録。

DBAF③→今回の新刊ですが、ほぼ最終回のみの収録です。

ここのところほったらかしですいません。
アラシの削除もおっついてない状態です（ＴДＴ）
感想板読みズラくてすいません。
感想いただいてる方のはちゃんと読んでます。
いつもありがとうございます。

えっと映画の予告見ました。…いんじゃないっすかねｗ
普通に楽しみです。
原作のイメージどうこうってのは僕に言う資格ないっすからね(⌒＿⌒;
かめはめ波は片手で撃つのかなｗ

あと、インフィニットワールド！
まったくのノータッチです。いつの間にか発売してました。
どうなんすかね？面白そうではあるんですけど…
中古が出回るころにこっそり買おうかな…。

The Tori-bot · Post by **The Tori-bot** » Sun Dec 14, 2008 4:48 pm

That's great to hear.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Sun Dec 14, 2008 4:50 pm

So, book two will cover up to page 127 and the blog with soon be up to...page 131?

SSJ Helldog · Post by **SSJ Helldog** » Tue Dec 16, 2008 8:18 pm

Does anyone have the images of the book covers? I looked around a bit, but this thread's gotten rather large.

Suupaa Gohan 2 · Post by **Suupaa Gohan 2** » Wed Dec 17, 2008 1:12 am

I can't believe I just read (the majority of) 45 pages worth of this. @_@;

Either way, a few thoughts, but first,

JulieYBM wrote:That 'Toyble is a name for four people' rumor must be true, ala CLAMP or whatever...

Highly doubtful. The blog implies he's just one fan, and probably not even semi-professional (like one could call many Doujinshi authors) due to the tracing issue. Yes, his art is fantastic, but in spite of that there have been obvious spottings of tracing or...well, let's call it 'extreme use of reference'. Typically you wouldn't expect a professional Doujinshi artist/circle to draw so heavily from the source material, let alone the claims of it being someone who was staffed by Toei. Don't trust things you hear on n00bish Dragonball forums; it was probably just a rumor.

As for the Brolli issue, I'm inclined to think he won't show up. Those 'pages' seem to be much older work of his, based on the art and even inking style - likely before he started doing the AF proper. As some have mentioned already, his ideas seem to be taken from the more well-known aspects of the old AF rumors - they would have to be the 'big' ones to make it all the way to Japan, given that he supposedly doesn't speak English and wouldn't likely be browsing old English DBZ fansites, which could explain why his story isn't identical to all those old 'summaries' and only uses base ideas like the concept of Xicor being the son of Gokou and a Goddess, and the design of SSJ5/Gokou's new dogi. Among those old rumors was the ever-popular Brolli coming back as a main character, so it's likely he just drew his own idea for the infamous SSJ5 transformation and based it on those old rumors...given how AF has a surprising amount of thought put into the story compared to many fan comics, I find it more likely that he's taken the story in his own direction since, and decided to keep Brolli out of the picture. Conjecture, of course, but those SSJ5 pages are noticeably older and less refined artwork, so I think my theory has some merit to it.

Anyways...I'm in love with the art. Somehow his designs are Toriyama-esque while still unique, and that Daizenshuu-style cover art is particularly awesome. I must say, if this were 2001 and I was still a clueless and obsessed DB fan, and I saw these pages...it's no doubt that some people could really be fooled into thinking this was 'official'. Less serious or newer fans could easily mistake Toyble's art for Toriyama-Sensei's. If not for the fact that it follows GT, the art style is frighteningly similar to the Buu era of the Manga.

Story-wise, like I said, it's got a surprising amount of thought put into it...he clearly didn't just shit out a basic villain and premise like all too many fan Manga do, basically. Elements like the West Kaiohshin's backstory (sidenote, reading this thread, I was surprised at how many people didn't realize that's who the character was...granted I didn't understand the story as of page 1, but there was no mistaking the character design o.o), Tapion's tie-in, and even the beginnings of explaining what happened to Gokou at the end of GT were obviously thought out ahead of time.

I also thought it was nice to see things like Papayaman, and Piccolo in Hell (and though I wouldn't exactly call anything with nerd Gohan 'nice', I liked the whole 'Professor Gohan' thing, because the idea that he'd become a teacher is present in my fanfic as well). Basically, while there's a lot of uber-powerful fighting going on, and I've always hated forms above SSJ1, I appreciate it because of the story's attention to detail and attempts to incorporate elements DBZ didn't expand upon...such as the Kaiohshin, as I'm certain we'll learn more of them in the future. I'd love it if Toyble continued this trend and brought about some incorporation of such things as the Tsufurujin or Dabra's Demon Plane.

Overall, definitely keeping up with this one, and eager to see where it goes...it has great potential to bomb, but it's also got a great deal of potential to be insanely fucking awesome.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:36 pm

New pages are up...

Saiyan-Professor · Post by **Saiyan-Professor** » Fri Jan 02, 2009 11:17 pm

Can someone please tell me how Kibito-Kai is having a better job of handling Xicor than Vegeta did?

peterx · Post by **peterx** » Sat Jan 03, 2009 3:27 am

Saiyan-Professor wrote:Can someone please tell me how Kibito-Kai is having a better job of handling Xicor than Vegeta did?

Because he uses his mind instead of brute force

Post by **desirecampbell** » Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:21 am

Just waiting on zips to upload now, but 119 and 120 are done and 121 and 122 are ready for translation. 101-110.zip and 111-120.zip have the updated pages (108, 110, 111), and two new 'extras' are up, and Tarble and Gure's names are proper now.

Should be any minute now.

Saiyan-Professor · Post by **Saiyan-Professor** » Sat Jan 03, 2009 11:34 am

Can someone ask Toyble if he is going to include Broli after all? I do not see the point in drawing him initially and creating wallpapers and the like just to exclude him later. He might even have Tarble and Gure show up later for some reason.

Post by **desirecampbell** » Sat Jan 03, 2009 11:35 am

http://desirecampbell.com/project/dbaf

Up's yo!

finnishjuoppo · Post by **finnishjuoppo** » Sat Jan 03, 2009 1:02 pm

I wish that there would be more humans fightning exept uub, if he is human.
We need Yamcha,Tien,Chiatzou and Krillin back to kick some ass

Taku128 · Post by **Taku128** » Sat Jan 03, 2009 4:35 pm

desirecampbell wrote:http://desirecampbell.com/project/dbaf

Up's yo!

All of the text bubbles on the newest two pages are blank.

Post by **desirecampbell** » Sat Jan 03, 2009 6:03 pm

Taku128 wrote:
desirecampbell wrote:http://desirecampbell.com/project/dbaf
Up's yo!
All of the text bubbles on the newest two pages are blank.

desirecampbell wrote:Just waiting on zips to upload now, but 119 and 120 are done and 121 and 122 are ready for translation. 101-110.zip and 111-120.zip have the updated pages (108, 110, 111), and two new 'extras' are up, and Tarble and Gure's names are proper now.
Should be any minute now.

Taku128 · Post by **Taku128** » Sat Jan 03, 2009 6:07 pm

desirecampbell wrote:
Taku128 wrote:
desirecampbell wrote:http://desirecampbell.com/project/dbaf
Up's yo!
All of the text bubbles on the newest two pages are blank.

desirecampbell wrote:Just waiting on zips to upload now, but 119 and 120 are done and 121 and 122 are ready for translation. 101-110.zip and 111-120.zip have the updated pages (108, 110, 111), and two new 'extras' are up, and Tarble and Gure's names are proper now.
Should be any minute now.

>_> That's what I get for not reading all of the new posts in the topic.

Post by **Herms** » Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:20 pm

121
Xicor: [top] Wha...what [bottom] Is this....!!!
Kaioshin: Haaaaah!!!
Xicor: Guaaaaaaaaah!!!

122
Kaioshin: [top] Sle...sleep forever [bottom] Within this sword!!!
Evil Kaioshin: This is bad!!!

Post by **desirecampbell** » Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:39 pm

Herms wrote:121
Xicor: [top] Wha...what [bottom] Is this....!!!
Kaioshin: Haaaaah!!!
Xicor: Guaaaaaaaaah!!!

122
Kaioshin: [top] Sle...sleep forever [bottom] Within this sword!!!
Evil Kaioshin: This is bad!!!

Thanks. And they're up.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:54 pm

Sweetness.

So, did Toyble say if he was going to upload his Comike exclusive content to the blog or what??

EDIT: Also, I'm thinking these last few pages (up to 130) will be the end of the first fight and probably fighting as a whole for a little bit. If Xicor is stored in the sword West Kaiôshin will have to figure out a way to free him.

Forgotten Hero · Post by **Forgotten Hero** » Sun Jan 04, 2009 3:34 am

These were some good pages, I hope it won't take very long for the next pages.

Post by **desirecampbell** » Sun Feb 01, 2009 10:37 am

New pages:
http://blog.livedoor.jp/toyble/archives/51286160.html

News:
http://blog.livedoor.jp/toyble/archives/51285347.html

委託はじめました。
ご無沙汰ですいません。toybleです。
以前、ご報告させていただいたとおり委託販売を始めました。

委託は1巻と2巻のみです（冬コミケと全く同じものです）
3巻最終回ver.は3巻通常版としての発売を目指しますので、委託は致しません。

委託先は普段から一番お世話になってる、まんだらけさんにお願いすることにいたしました。

下記サイトより通販で購入することができるみたいです。
ちなみにケータイからはアクセスできないようなので、直接お店にお問い合わせください。
http://ekizo.mandarake.co.jp/shop/ja/se ... 2641&withA

それと、それほどたくさん委託したわけではないので、売り切れになる可能性がございます。無くなり次第追加させていただきますが、次の販売まで数日or数週間かかることになると思いますので、ご興味がある方はお早めにお願いいたします。

※1巻2巻に収録されている内容は公開中のものと同じです。ご注意ください。

…で。
次の更新なんですけど、2月1日にする予定です。
一応5ページ予定してます。これで1巻、2巻に収録の内容すべてwebでも読めるようになります。

今後も販売ベースではなく、あくまでもココでの公開をメインに描き進めていきたいと思っておりますのでよろしくお願いいたします。

http://blog.livedoor.jp/toyble/archives/51278691.html

前売り特典
ご感想ありがとうございます。
いろいろがんばりますのでよろしくお願いします。

今年はゆっくり正月を過ごすことができました。

さて。
みなさんは実写映画ＤＢの前売り買いました？
知ってるかもしれませんが、特典でベアブリックがもらえるんですよ。

やっぱ映画はパンツが紺なんですねｗ
でもかわいいっすね！やっぱベアブリックはいいなぁ～

その昔ベアブリックが大好きで、発売当初は集めまくってましたｗ
さすがにコラボもんとか限定もんとか増えすぎてコンプリートは断念しましたが。

ちなみに現在愛用のバッグはベアブリック柄ですｗ