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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by caejones » Wed Feb 24, 2010 10:31 am

Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:
DNA wrote:Thank you very much. No offence but... what's with the advertisement and signatures everywhere? In this day and age, if someone steals your scans, it's easy to track who actually made them. You could have just put it all in the final page... Kinda ruins the whole thing and you even put it on top of the artwork sometimes...
Stop complaining. At least you got to read it.
But I didn't, 'cause I usually read Herms's translations that he posts on the forum. :cry:
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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Big Momma » Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:39 pm

Dunno if these have been posted or not:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yxyXqJgWZio
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2aUwb2UB ... re=related


They may not be the greatest, but I still think they're pretty good.
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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:39 pm

Big Momma wrote:Dunno if these have been posted or not:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yxyXqJgWZio
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2aUwb2UB ... re=related


They may not be the greatest, but I still think they're pretty good.
Agreed. Those are pretty good considering they are fan made.


I don't know about you, but this makes me want Toyble's AF to be animated for real by Toei.

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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Godo » Thu Feb 25, 2010 9:29 pm

caejones wrote:
Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:
DNA wrote:Thank you very much. No offence but... what's with the advertisement and signatures everywhere? In this day and age, if someone steals your scans, it's easy to track who actually made them. You could have just put it all in the final page... Kinda ruins the whole thing and you even put it on top of the artwork sometimes...
Stop complaining. At least you got to read it.
But I didn't, 'cause I usually read Herms's translations that he posts on the forum. :cry:
Does it help if I type out the text and what's happening in the pages for you, since I think you can't watch images, right?

Page 1:

Kame Sennin: "And then Vegeta gathered all the energy he had left, and launched a final attack on Xicor!"
Goku Jr: "And then?"
Vegeta Jr: "What happened next?"
Both are excited.
Kame Sennin notices the sunset.
Kame Sennin: "Well, it's getting kind of late. That's enough for today."
Goku Jr: "What?"
Vegeta Jr: "B...but wait!"
Both are in a shocked state.

Page 2:
Goku Jr: "Grandpa Goku hasn't arrived yet!"
Vegeta Jr: "I want to hear more!"
Both are excited.
Kame Sennin: "I know, but I am getting tired of talking so much. I'm getting old."
Pan: "That's enough! Kame Sennin is tired!"
Goku Jr: "Ok..."
Vegeta Jr: "Let's go, Goku!"
They are walking away.
Vegeta Jr: "He said his story was going to be short. But it's actually quite long..."
Goku Jr: "Yeah, he also said he was going to talk more about Gohan, but he always comes back to Goku."
Both chattering: "Kame Sennin is old and talks nonsense..."

Page 3:
Pan: "Such a rude bunch! You shouldn't be training those bad guys!"
Kame Sennin: "What are you talking about? They are all I've got left..."
Pan: "The rest of our friends have left us..."
Kame Sennin: "I've lived a very long time. It's ironic I've survived until today."
Pan: "Huh?" (Notices a spaceship looking like Babidi's in the air)

Page 4:
A huge explosion.
Goku and Vegeta Jr: "WHAT?!"
A creature flies up in the air.
In the next panel, we see a dog-like Majin Buu and someone looking like Babidi, but with a bang.
The Babidi look-alike: "Yah! Ah! Ah!"

Page 5:
The Babidi look-alike: "I am Bebidi, the son of Babidi! I came to finish what my father started 100 years ago. Before you killed him!"
Kame Sennin: "Wh...what did he say?"
Bebidi: "Destroy this planet, Majin Puu!"
Majin Puu: "Puu!"
Goku and Vegeta Jr look at the two, first confused, then with evil grins.

Page 6:
Goku and Vegeta Jr. dash against the enemies: "Yah!"
Bebidi and Majin Puu make funny gag-faces of fear.
Vegeta Jr punches Majin Puu's face, and Goku Jr kicks Bebidi in the face.
Pan: "Darn those kids...no need to worry about them!"
Kame Sennin takes off his sunglasses and looks very peaceful.

Page 7:
Kame Sennin (thinking): "Haha...hey ho...Goku...The new generation is more than ready"
During this panel we see Goku Jr. pull Majin Puu's ears and Vegeta Jr dragging Bebidi back to the fight bu dragging his cape.
Kame Sennin (thinking): "My role is finished..."
We see Goku and Vegeta Jr tying the enemies up.
Pan: "Well done boys, tighten them up well! Listen, Kame Sennin, I..."
Kame Sennin falls to the ground. Pan looks shocked.
Pan: "KAME SENNIN!?"

Page 8:
We see the shores of the sea, Kame Sennin wears his old clothes that he wore in the beginning of Dragonball.
Kame Sennin: "This...this place...KAME HOUSE!"
We see the Kame House. He is on his own island like in the old days.

Page 9:
Kame Sennin: "This can only be a dream!"
Someone shouts: "Master Muten Roshi!"
We see that it's Kuririn, smiling.
Kame Sennin: "But I...It's Kuririn!"
Kuririn: "He he..."
Kuririn bows down respectfully and says: "Sensei...welcome, it's been such a long time!"
Kame Sennin is speechless.
Yamcha appears: "Master Muten Roshi!"

Page 10:
We see a panel with Yamcha, Puar, Oolong, Umigame, Ranchi (blonde) and Bulma.
Yamcha: "Welcome home!"
Puar: "Ah ha!"
Umigame: "Hello Kame!"
Oolong: "Hi!"
Ranchi: "Yo!"
Kame Sennin: "G...guys!"

Page 11:
We see a panel with Gyumao, Chichi, Tenshinhan and Chao-zu.
Gyumao: "Master Muten Roshi! We finally meet again!"
Tenshinhan: "It's an honor to meet again!"
Chao-zu: "Ha. Ha."
Grandpa Gohan arrives with Mutaito.
Grandpa Gohan: "We're here too!"
Grandpa Gohan: "Master Muten Roshi..."
Mutaito: "Well done!"

Page 12:
Kame Sennin: "Go...Gohan! Master Mutaito!"
Someone shouts: "Kame Sennin!"
It's Goku!
Kame Sennin: "Go...Goku!"
Goku: "Kame Sennin...thanks for everything! Now we can rest!"
Kame Sennin is speechless.

Page 13:
Goku reaches out his hand.
Kame Sennin: "Heh..."
Kame Sennin: "Take this!" Hits Goku in the head with his stick.
Goku: "Gyah! "hat's gotten into you?!"
Kame Sennin: "We can't rest! You still need lots of training!"
Goku: "Oh, no!"

Page 14:
Kame Sennin (serious): "Put on the turtle shell and swim 50 times around this island!"
Goku: "Huh?! Now?!"
Kame Sennin: "Of course! Immidiately!"
Goku (with the turtle shell on): "Aaah!"
Kuririn: "Ha ha! Poor Goku!"
Kame Sennin: "What are you waiting for Kuririn! You too!"
Kuririn: "Huh?! Me too?!"
Kame Sennin: "Watch out for the sharks!"
Goku and Kuririrn (being chased by a shark): "Gyaah!"
We see everyone laughing, including Kame Sennin.

Page 15:
We come back to reality.
Goku and Vegeta Jr: "...nin! Kame Sennin!"
Kame Sennin lies on the ground peacefully.
They countinue to scream Kame Sennin's name.
We see the landscape.

Page 16:
Kame Sennin: "Hey Goku. It's been a wonderful adventure". We see Goku and Grandpa Gohan's house and the Four Star Dragonball.

Page 17:
Kame Sennin: "That's right...but now it's over..." We see Kame House crushed by a concrete pillar which is a part of a bridge. In the rubble we see the Two Star Dragonball.

Page 18:
Kame Sennin: "Yes...It's a bit sad..." We see Urunai Baba and her fighters still doing the same old thing.
Goku: "What are you talking about Kame Sennin? The world is full of wonderful things!"
Kame Sennin: "Ah ah...that's right...and pichi pichi gals, no?"
During each panel, we a Dragonball with a different number of stars than the other.

Page 19:
Kame Sennin: "Wh...what? It's the truth! Go...Goku, come on, hurry!"
Goku: "Oh, just wait a minute Kame Sennin!"
Kame Sennin: "Huh? What for?"
Goku: "For a final goodbye!"

Page 20:
We see adult Goku, and Kame Sennin with a halo, rising their hands for a goodbye.
Text: "To the people of all the world, thanks for everyting! See you soon! Goodbye!"

Page 21:
Vegeta standing next to Porunga saying: "Hmm...What nonsense!"

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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Hellspawn28 » Fri Feb 26, 2010 2:22 pm

Piccolo Daimaoh wrote: I don't know about you, but this makes me want Toyble's AF to be animated for real by Toei.
Maybe, if they do some changes with the story first in my opinon.
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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Fri Feb 26, 2010 11:35 pm

Hellspawn28 wrote:
Piccolo Daimaoh wrote: I don't know about you, but this makes me want Toyble's AF to be animated for real by Toei.
Maybe, if they do some changes with the story first in my opinon.
I don't know. Everything seems pretty good so far.

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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Hellspawn28 » Fri Feb 26, 2010 11:53 pm

Gohan able to go SSj4 out of nowhere, and Vegeta able to go SSj4 with out the help out of Bluma is something that needs to be fixed in my opinon.
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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by JulieYBM » Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:05 am

Hellspawn28 wrote:Gohan able to go SSj4 out of nowhere, and Vegeta able to go SSj4 with out the help out of Bluma is something that needs to be fixed in my opinon.
Define 'fixed'? Obviously a period of time has passed since the end of Dragon Ball GT. Any number of things could have changed.
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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:20 am

JulieYBM wrote:
Hellspawn28 wrote:Gohan able to go SSj4 out of nowhere, and Vegeta able to go SSj4 with out the help out of Bluma is something that needs to be fixed in my opinon.
Define 'fixed'? Obviously a period of time has passed since the end of Dragon Ball GT. Any number of things could have changed.
Exactly. Characters would have.... I don't know, gotten stronger.

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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Godo » Sat Feb 27, 2010 6:58 am

Umm...Gohan going SSJ4 contradicts the fact that only pure blood Saiya-jins can go SSJ4...
...it's Saiya-jin fanwank to the extreme.

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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:20 am

Godo wrote:Umm...Gohan going SSJ4 contradicts the fact that only pure blood Saiya-jins can go SSJ4...
...it's Saiya-jin fanwank to the extreme.
Really? When was this said?

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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by desirecampbell » Sat Feb 27, 2010 8:02 am

Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:
Godo wrote:Umm...Gohan going SSJ4 contradicts the fact that only pure blood Saiya-jins can go SSJ4...
...it's Saiya-jin fanwank to the extreme.
Really? When was this said?
This is a common rumour based on Vegeta saying he couldn't become a SSj4 while under the control of Baby because his "blood wasn't pure". Vegeta's clearly referring to the "impurity" of having an alien being inside him, but many fans see 'blood... pure" and assume he means 'pure blooded Saiyan'.

Also, Spencer Morales has apparently been reposting the DBAF pages on his site. I'm not sure how I feel about this. Maybe I should have been putting my name on every page :P

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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Sat Feb 27, 2010 8:17 am

desirecampbell wrote:This is a common rumour based on Vegeta saying he couldn't become a SSj4 while under the control of Baby because his "blood wasn't pure". Vegeta's clearly referring to the "impurity" of having an alien being inside him, but many fans see 'blood... pure" and assume he means 'pure blooded Saiyan'.
Yeah, I didn't think it was said at all that you had to be a pure-blooded Saiyan to transform into a SS4.

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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Rocketman » Sat Feb 27, 2010 9:48 am

Gohan going SS4 contradicts the fact that Gohan is a stupid lazy dumbass who never ever works to get stronger unless there's something RIGHT NOW IN HIS FACE.

Plus, if they went through all the trouble to grow Gohan's tail back, turn him Golden Oozaru and then manage to get him to gain control over it, why didn't they do it for Trunks and Goten too.

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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Godo » Sat Feb 27, 2010 11:26 am

Rocketman wrote:Gohan going SS4 contradicts the fact that Gohan is a stupid lazy dumbass who never ever works to get stronger unless there's something RIGHT NOW IN HIS FACE.

Plus, if they went through all the trouble to grow Gohan's tail back, turn him Golden Oozaru and then manage to get him to gain control over it, why didn't they do it for Trunks and Goten too.
Couldn't agree more. In DBZ, the only way to make Gohan reach a much higher level of power was unlocking it.

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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Hellspawn28 » Sat Feb 27, 2010 4:41 pm

Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:
JulieYBM wrote:
Hellspawn28 wrote:Gohan able to go SSj4 out of nowhere, and Vegeta able to go SSj4 with out the help out of Bluma is something that needs to be fixed in my opinon.
Define 'fixed'? Obviously a period of time has passed since the end of Dragon Ball GT. Any number of things could have changed.
Exactly. Characters would have.... I don't know, gotten stronger.
Yeah but their still be a reason how Vegeta can go SSJ4 without the help from Bulma? Unless the machine allowed him to go back his tail some type of side effect?
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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Sat Feb 27, 2010 8:26 pm

Rocketman wrote: Plus, if they went through all the trouble to grow Gohan's tail back, turn him Golden Oozaru and then manage to get him to gain control over it, why didn't they do it for Trunks and Goten too.
Maybe he already did the Golden Oozaru thing before the events of the story. As with Trunks and Goten, maybe then can become SS4 Gotenks.

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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Herms » Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:12 pm

desirecampbell wrote:This is a common rumour based on Vegeta saying he couldn't become a SSj4 while under the control of Baby because his "blood wasn't pure". Vegeta's clearly referring to the "impurity" of having an alien being inside him, but many fans see 'blood... pure" and assume he means 'pure blooded Saiyan'.
It's actually Bulma's line people are thinking of, but she doesn't even say anything about Vegeta's blood not being pure, just that Baby's cells "were interfering". The conversation goes like this (taken from Daimao's subtitles):
Vegeta: "But when I was taken over by Baby, and recieved a large does of Bruits waves on Planet Tsufru, turning me into a great ape, I did not become a Super Saiyan 4."

Bulma: "At the time, Baby's own cells were interfering, which kept you from becoming Super Saiyan 4."
In the Funi dub though, the line about Baby's cells is given to Vegeta, who actaully does mention pure-bloodedness. So basically it's another dub mistake.
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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Hellspawn28 » Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:56 pm

Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:
Rocketman wrote: Plus, if they went through all the trouble to grow Gohan's tail back, turn him Golden Oozaru and then manage to get him to gain control over it, why didn't they do it for Trunks and Goten too.
Maybe he already did the Golden Oozaru thing before the events of the story. As with Trunks and Goten, maybe then can become SS4 Gotenks.
Maybe so, but if that did happen then they should have mention it then since otherwise people would be like "What? The last time I check that Veget can't go SSj4 unless Bluma helps out with the Blutz Wave Generator".
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Re: Toyble DBAF - updated Feb 9, 2010 - page 162

Post by Rocketman » Mon Mar 01, 2010 12:03 am

Herms wrote:In the Funi dub though, the line about Baby's cells is given to Vegeta, who actaully does mention pure-bloodedness. So basically it's another dub mistake.
Can't we have one thing that doesn't get ruined by the shithead hybrids?

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