Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

[desirecampbell]

Urgh, sorry guys - just saw this update now. I'll get these new pages typeset as soon as I can (looking like Saturday). Thanks for the quick translation Herms, and big ups to Necro for scans.

[LordFrz]

Here is a cleaned up version with the text. This is the first time I have type set so it's not the best.

Thanks for the Raws and the translations.

Raw by- Necrosaber
Translation by- Herms

http://hotfile.com/dl/102567324/fea1644/DBAF.zip.html

[DNA]

Here is a cleaned up version with the text. This is the first time I have type set so it's not the best.

Thanks for the Raws and the translations.

Raw by- Necrosaber
Translation by- Herms

http://hotfile.com/dl/102567324/fea1644/DBAF.zip.html

Why would you do that..? That's kinda desirecampbell job/project. Doing that is just kinda rude in my opinion...

[LordFrz]

Nothing is stopping him from doing it still. Just though I'd share what I made to put in my own collection.
You do not have to even look at it if you don't want to, I was just trying to be nice.

[DNA]

It's just the way you did it, came across as rude, in my opinion. But good job nonetheless.

[LordFrz]

Well if I come off as rude then I apologizes, did not mean to offend.

[DNA]

Again, it's just my opinion... I don't know what anyone else thinks about that. Maybe I'm just weird.

[tomac66]

Here is a cleaned up version with the text. This is the first time I have type set so it's not the best.

Thanks for the Raws and the translations.

Raw by- Necrosaber
Translation by- Herms

http://hotfile.com/dl/102567324/fea1644/DBAF.zip.html

Hi, thank´s by the translation, but page 12 (10 in your scans) is lost.

[Piccolo Daimaoh]

Thanks for the translation, Herms. I'll wait untill desirecampbell does his typesetting, just for consistency's sake. I'm not too keen on Broly's reappearance, but I hope that he won't get as much attention as he did in DBM.

[desirecampbell]

Why would you do that..? That's kinda desirecampbell job/project. Doing that is just kinda rude in my opinion...

LordFrz emailed me before he posted this, and I was going to give my blessing to post it (and actually post it myself) but, I've been crazy busy.

So, go ahead and read it with my "okay", if you're looking for that It's pretty well done.

It's still on my list of TO DOs, but still not done (though I'm alone all week, so there's hope yet).

[DNA]

Why would you do that..? That's kinda desirecampbell job/project. Doing that is just kinda rude in my opinion...

LordFrz emailed me before he posted this, and I was going to give my blessing to post it (and actually post it myself) but, I've been crazy busy.

So, go ahead and read it with my "okay", if you're looking for that :P It's pretty well done.

It's still on my list of TO DOs, but still not done (though I'm alone all week, so there's hope yet).

I'm just faithful to you man! :<

[Herms]

In LordFrz's scanslation, on page 2 Vegeta's "Of course it is" line is misplaced and put in Broli's speech balloon. Broli's "Is...is this...the living world?" should be split up between his two speech balloons, while "Of course it is" should go into Vegeta's blank speech balloon after his "Hmph!". Also, there doesn't seem to be a page 10. Everything else looks good.

[LordFrz]

In LordFrz's scanslation, on page 2 Vegeta's "Of course it is" line is misplaced and put in Broli's speech balloon. Broli's "Is...is this...the living world?" should be split up between his two speech balloons, while "Of course it is" should go into Vegeta's blank speech balloon after his "Hmph!". Also, there doesn't seem to be a page 10. Everything else looks good.

I do not have the missing page, it seems the posted image was corrupt or deleted from the host site.

[DNA]

Now it's the iving world.

[Herms]

@LordFrz: I guess it's hard to see, but there's a second (still blank) speech balloon in panel 5. That's where "Of course it is" is supposed to go, not in the one with "Hmph".

[DNA]

Don't forget to change "iving word" to "living world". Also use caps after reticence; examples: "Is... is this..." the second is should have a capitalized I, also on the next bubble you start it with "the" instead of "The".

[LordFrz]

Ok lets try this one, hope there are no mistakes.

[DNA]

You still forgot the proper capitalization. It just looks weird when you go to a new bubble and you're graced with "the" intead of "The".

[LordFrz]

That work for you.

[DNA]

Perfect, great job.