Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Kendamu · Post by **Kendamu** » Mon Oct 13, 2008 8:34 pm

SaiyaMel wrote:My idea of a "DBAF" is the past/pre era - before before Kakkarot is born.

I'm also not much of a fan of these SSJ levels beyond 1 or 2, nor the insanity of power level increases beyond the Cell arc thing... It's a shame there's much more demand for such crap by the general fandom than there is for a pre-era Dragonball.

Despite such, this is a much more interesting take than the rumors of AF that I've heard over the years and makes SSj5 seem like something more special than what most people would make it out to be.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Mon Oct 13, 2008 8:35 pm

SaiyaMel wrote:My idea of a "DBAF" is the past/pre era - before before Kakkarot is born.

I'm also not much of a fan of these SSJ levels beyond 1 or 2, nor the insanity of power level increases beyond the Cell arc thing... It's a shame there's much more demand for such crap by the general fandom than there is for a pre-era Dragonball.

Well, new, accurate-looking DB is better than nothing...

Neon Z · Post by **Neon Z** » Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:18 pm

SaiyaMel wrote:My idea of a "DBAF" is the past/pre era - before before Kakkarot is born.

I'm also not much of a fan of these SSJ levels beyond 1 or 2, nor the insanity of power level increases beyond the Cell arc thing... It's a shame there's much more demand for such crap by the general fandom than there is for a pre-era Dragonball.

Most pre-DB work I've seen done by fans is just Saiyan history crap though, which is completely irrelevant to everyone besides Vegeta due to their destruction at the hands of Freeza. At least, these future stories still keep generally similar casts to the tv series.

Dayspring · Post by **Dayspring** » Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:37 pm

Neon Z wrote:
SaiyaMel wrote:My idea of a "DBAF" is the past/pre era - before before Kakkarot is born.

I'm also not much of a fan of these SSJ levels beyond 1 or 2, nor the insanity of power level increases beyond the Cell arc thing... It's a shame there's much more demand for such crap by the general fandom than there is for a pre-era Dragonball.
Most pre-DB work I've seen done by fans is just Saiyan history crap though, which is completely irrelevant to everyone besides Vegeta due to their destruction at the hands of Freeza. At least, these future stories still keep generally similar casts to the tv series.

Yeah, don't look to prequels for fics starring characters that appear in the series...

It's pretty simple to avoid having Saiyans get killed off by Freeza: set the story years prior to the destruction of the planet. Not everything has to be what other Saiyans are doing during the time of the Bardock special.

But yeah, I'm guilty of making Saiyan history crap. Almost always starring an earlier Bardock and co. Even my current fic stars Bardock, Tarble, Onio, Nappa and Vegeta.

Post by **desirecampbell** » Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:57 pm

http://desirecampbell.com/project/dbaf/

New pages up, zip forthcoming.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Wed Oct 15, 2008 3:48 pm

desirecampbell wrote:http://desirecampbell.com/project/dbaf/

New pages up, zip forthcoming.

Sweetness.

Is it just me or is 111--artwise--a little 'uninked' looking?

Tatsunoboshi Horoko · Post by **Tatsunoboshi Horoko** » Wed Oct 15, 2008 5:22 pm

It's just using speed lines to show there's either a massive amount of light shining on them or something really fast is heading towards or away from them. (When Toriyama does it, it's usually in those situations.)

SaiyaMel · Post by **SaiyaMel** » Thu Oct 16, 2008 3:48 am

Neon Z wrote:
SaiyaMel wrote:My idea of a "DBAF" is the past/pre era - before before Kakkarot is born.

I'm also not much of a fan of these SSJ levels beyond 1 or 2, nor the insanity of power level increases beyond the Cell arc thing... It's a shame there's much more demand for such crap by the general fandom than there is for a pre-era Dragonball.
Most pre-DB work I've seen done by fans is just Saiyan history crap though, which is completely irrelevant to everyone besides Vegeta due to their destruction at the hands of Freeza. At least, these future stories still keep generally similar casts to the tv series.

My pre-DB I intend to put some focus on Freeza's past and that of some other cast. I for one am much more interested in pre-DB stuff than post-DB...

Captain-Sora · Post by **Captain-Sora** » Thu Oct 16, 2008 4:01 am

On the fan comic I'm working on doing, is more OC(Original Character) related and I'm not sure if I'll even add Saiyans in it, the main character isn't one, that's for sure. I'm still not sure if I should attempt to add it to the timeline of the DB manga or just make it an alternate universe so I can expand on existing ideas and not limit myself to DB logic blocking the way of exaggerations and changes, hehe.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Sun Oct 19, 2008 12:25 pm

http://blog.livedoor.jp/toyble/archives ... l#20081019

DNA · Post by **DNA** » Wed Oct 22, 2008 3:19 pm

That last drawing he made is pretty cool :P

Eison · Post by **Eison** » Tue Oct 28, 2008 11:12 am

There is something wrong with his site, but I can't read Japanese so I don't know what.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Tue Oct 28, 2008 6:50 pm

Eison wrote:There is something wrong with his site, but I can't read Japanese so I don't know what.

It works for me.

Post by **Herms** » Tue Oct 28, 2008 10:31 pm

It wasn't working for me last night, so maybe it got fixed.

The post with closeups of Paikuhan and Trunks is about how Toyble corrected those drawings after people pointed out some mistakes. In Paikuhan's case, he forgot to draw his halo, and with Trunks he forgot to draw the torn-up patch on his shoulder.

Now the post with Tarble, Vegeta, and Nappa:

Vegeta: Tarble, we no longer need a coward like you. Never leave this planet again.

Tarble: B-but, big brother...

Nappa: Hey Raditz, can you hear me? There's no longer any Saiyan on this planet. How about you go look for your younger brother on Earth, Kakarot or whatever it was?

Perhaps something like this happened before Raditz came to Earth...

Then at the bottom he says he's fixed Vegeta's fingers, and apoligizes for making so many mistakes.

Eison · Post by **Eison** » Sat Nov 01, 2008 7:03 am

JulieYBM wrote:
Eison wrote:There is something wrong with his site, but I can't read Japanese so I don't know what.
It works for me.

Yeah, it was almost directly after I posted it here it was fixed...

And there are two new pages

And why aren't the words that he draws like "doomm" (when Gohan goes SSJ4) translated anymore? Such as done on this page:

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Sat Nov 01, 2008 11:08 am

I already emailed Desire, but two new pages are up, including four preview sketches.

Post by **Herms** » Sun Nov 02, 2008 10:30 am

Page 113

Panel 2
Xicor: Early market fiscal specialization implicates segmentary vestigial impulses as the tertiary impetus for ambulatory systematics. Furthermore, the rotational aeronautics inherent in the clandestine exoteric rotisserie implicates quasi-Sisyphusian exegesis.

No wait, on second glance, he’s actually just going “Guwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!” My mistake.

Oh, and then in the third panel, he’s going “Daah!!!!”

Post by **desirecampbell** » Sun Nov 02, 2008 8:52 pm

DBAF pages 112 and 113
You know the drill: new pages up on the project page.

Chibi Mystic Gohan · Post by **Chibi Mystic Gohan** » Wed Nov 05, 2008 9:17 am

Regarding the drawing he did on 10/22 with Vegeta and Tarble, I wonder if Toyble intentionally had Nappa say the word "Earth" in front of Tarble? That would certainly explain how he knew to look for Vegeta on Earth...

Eison · Post by **Eison** » Wed Nov 05, 2008 10:50 am

Toyble also edited page 108 and 110 for the halo of Pikkon and scratch on Trunks shoulder but they aren't on www.desirecampbell.com yet.

And why is the quality of the pages from Toyble better as the ones from desirecampbell?